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Scratch N' Tavi 3 Page 20 by SilvatheBrony Scratch N' Tavi 3 Page 20 by SilvatheBrony
Yay, New page after about 12 days! So as I've said before I was going to make this page look nice. This is only part of what Issue 4 will look like, it'll be much better. I'm sure you could tell if you look back at previous issues, going from the radio to the main story always has a small improvement which is later improved more in the following issue.


Thanks for all of your patients and support ;>.

PS HALO 4444444444444444444444444444444 :DDDD

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:iconkeatonespalding:
If it is a matter of criticizing, i´m not very good because they do not draw, but i have seen with these eyes great cartoonists. So this is my opinion.
The drawings are excellent color but lose a little "Encouragement" by excessive reflection, not that i know of reflection but that´s how i feel.
As for the story, i love it, i read whenever i left wanting to know what happened x3
The ponies are well drawn, but i think they are something nosed xD

For everything else, is excelent. Keep it >wO

And sorry for the bad English, i use a traslator and the truth is not very good.
Even i know something of english that sometimes i see no point translates what, give me a chance >w
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I have to say, looking back on your old work compared to this, I am very impressed. Not only have you improved time after time upon your own style, you have also improved in how you portray things. Thoughts and emotions from the characters reach me more clearly. On this particular piece, I am very please with the amount of work it looks like you put into it. The ponies far off in the background though, I feel as if you could give them a little more depth than a singular color palette. The shading/lighting seems very professional, and man oh man those backgrounds. This must have taken you twelve days or so to finish! But I digress, This is an excellent piece and deserves nothing but the best of accommodations. I am Battlemuffins, and I approve this message.
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ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i spy cheerilee and dr. whooves in the back
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Raydhen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cherilee, is that you?
:iconcreepyponyfaceplz::iconsays3plz:Yes?
Uuhhh... sorry, fella O_O
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Haha, that could very well be it xD
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ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is like the first time you've ever responded to me
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Really? I respond to almost every comment I receive.
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ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes "almost"
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
^^ Sorry, I just don't know how to answer some comments.
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ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol
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:icontheuruguayanstallion:
Do you want to know who's best pony? I'll tell you who's best pony. See that blue thing on the stairs? he's best pony.
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Really? He's a little under developed though, I think the red one really shows the feelings of happiness, but with a small ounce of depression hidden away.
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