Yay, New page after about 12 days! So as I've said before I was going to make this page look nice. This is only part of what Issue 4 will look like, it'll be much better. I'm sure you could tell if you look back at previous issues, going from the radio to the main story always has a small improvement which is later improved more in the following issue.
I have to say, looking back on your old work compared to this, I am very impressed. Not only have you improved time after time upon your own style, you have also improved in how you portray things. Thoughts and emotions from the characters reach me more clearly. On this particular piece, I am very please with the amount of work it looks like you put into it. The ponies far off in the background though, I feel as if you could give them a little more depth than a singular color palette. The shading/lighting seems very professional, and man oh man those backgrounds. This must have taken you twelve days or so to finish! But I digress, This is an excellent piece and deserves nothing but the best of accommodations. I am Battlemuffins, and I approve this message.
If it is a matter of criticizing, i´m not very good because they do not draw, but i have seen with these eyes great cartoonists. So this is my opinion. The drawings are excellent color but lose a little "Encouragement" by excessive reflection, not that i know of reflection but that´s how i feel. As for the story, i love it, i read whenever i left wanting to know what happened x3 The ponies are well drawn, but i think they are something nosed xD
For everything else, is excelent. Keep it >wO
And sorry for the bad English, i use a traslator and the truth is not very good. Even i know something of english that sometimes i see no point translates what, give me a chance >w
Really? He's a little under developed though, I think the red one really shows the feelings of happiness, but with a small ounce of depression hidden away.
The drawings are excellent color but lose a little "Encouragement" by excessive reflection, not that i know of reflection but that´s how i feel.
As for the story, i love it, i read whenever i left wanting to know what happened x3
The ponies are well drawn, but i think they are something nosed xD
For everything else, is excelent. Keep it >wO
And sorry for the bad English, i use a traslator and the truth is not very good.
Even i know something of english that sometimes i see no point translates what, give me a chance >w
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