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Scratch N' Tavi 3 Page 20 by SilvatheBrony Scratch N' Tavi 3 Page 20 by SilvatheBrony
Yay, New page after about 12 days! So as I've said before I was going to make this page look nice. This is only part of what Issue 4 will look like, it'll be much better. I'm sure you could tell if you look back at previous issues, going from the radio to the main story always has a small improvement which is later improved more in the following issue.


Thanks for all of your patients and support ;>.

PS HALO 4444444444444444444444444444444 :DDDD

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If it is a matter of criticizing, i´m not very good because they do not draw, but i have seen with these eyes great cartoonists. So this is my opinion.
The drawings are excellent color but lose a little "Encouragement" by excessive reflection, not that i know of reflection but that´s how i feel.
As for the story, i love it, i read whenever i left wanting to know what happened x3
The ponies are well drawn, but i think they are something nosed xD

For everything else, is excelent. Keep it >wO

And sorry for the bad English, i use a traslator and the truth is not very good.
Even i know something of english that sometimes i see no point translates what, give me a chance >w
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I have to say, looking back on your old work compared to this, I am very impressed. Not only have you improved time after time upon your own style, you have also improved in how you portray things. Thoughts and emotions from the characters reach me more clearly. On this particular piece, I am very please with the amount of work it looks like you put into it. The ponies far off in the background though, I feel as if you could give them a little more depth than a singular color palette. The shading/lighting seems very professional, and man oh man those backgrounds. This must have taken you twelve days or so to finish! But I digress, This is an excellent piece and deserves nothing but the best of accommodations. I am Battlemuffins, and I approve this message.
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ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i spy cheerilee and dr. whooves in the back
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Raydhen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cherilee, is that you?
:iconcreepyponyfaceplz::iconsays3plz:Yes?
Uuhhh... sorry, fella O_O
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Haha, that could very well be it xD
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:iconask-djpon3:
ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is like the first time you've ever responded to me
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:iconsilvathebrony:
SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Really? I respond to almost every comment I receive.
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ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes "almost"
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
^^ Sorry, I just don't know how to answer some comments.
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ask-DJpon3 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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:icontheuruguayanstallion:
Do you want to know who's best pony? I'll tell you who's best pony. See that blue thing on the stairs? he's best pony.
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Really? He's a little under developed though, I think the red one really shows the feelings of happiness, but with a small ounce of depression hidden away.
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:icontheuruguayanstallion:
Yeah, but the blue one is all like just chillin there on the stairs, resting on that wall, hitting on that pink or orange pony (He doesn't cares about colors) that's passing by. He's supish, Johnny Rocketfingers supish.
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
I'm tellin ya, Red has seen some shit, but showed hope through it all, can Blue do that?
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:icontheuruguayanstallion:
Do you know what is it that Red saw? Blue in a bad mood, that's what he saw. Red is still seeing psychologists because of that.
However, blue respects him, he will never forget Red's support when he lost his brother in that war against the griffons, they are all undeveloped ponies after all.
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Well I guess I can agree with you on that one ;>
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BronyKymo Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
PS: BLACK OPS 2
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
PSS: NO
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SorinMysticRush Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waited so long...need more....i crave SUSTINANCE...hey season 3!
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:iconsilvathebrony:
SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Hopefully season 3 will keep you occupied, I needs me some Halo 4. Ah, I'll get on it soon though ;>
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RaenBoow Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
whathefuck!? When did the text change to midlane!? O_O
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RaenBoow Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The fake-gold statue makes me wonder if Canterlot has a mayor as Ponyville does. A sudden wish to see a crossover with Richie Rich is forming :XD:
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Could be a mayor, or could be a famous person ;>.
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DarkestSunset Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Last Panel:
GIRAFFE XD
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Well actually the neck isn't that long it just looks like it cause the man covers it.
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DarkestSunset Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know.
I like giraffe ponies though xD
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
You like the other OctaScratch comic don't you? xD
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DarkestSunset Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
.....
Yes xD
My top two favorite OctaScratch comics.
Yours and the other one xD
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Quibber123 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Large solid gold pony with a top hat and awesome stache/monocle combo is best solid gold pony statue with large top hat and awesome stache/monocle combo. Also you draw the most adorable Tavi :L
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Lol thanks ^^
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grimreeper2121 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice lol btw are u taviscratchpony on xbox live lol i saw someone with that name so i was wondering if it was u
lol
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Not even close. After2math :P
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grimreeper2121 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol i was just curious cause i saw that name. i alreasy had u added i thought u might have changed ur name or something lol
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Yeah no, it's the same name since I got live :>
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grimreeper2121 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol i see
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ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
... I don't like the look of those cliffs....
They would make good sniping roosts.
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
xD but seriously I don't like those cliffs I need to make them look more rock like somehow :S
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ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
You say that.... Meanwhile there is a sharpshooter setting up camp ri... He just deployed a Spawn Marker.... Better get to it chap and get rid of him before he calls in more *BOOM!*
.... Nevermind, he just had half of Town Hall annihilated... Didn't they just fix that building, or is that just me being crazy bonker- *BANG!* OI! WATCH WHERE YOU ARE SHOOTING YOU CRAZED MOR- *BANG*! ...





I'LL BE BACK YOU LIMEY BASTERD! I SWE- *BANG!!!!!!!*
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Nooooooooooooo the plot has been ruined D:
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ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
*An idle tumbleweed tumbles by a corpse missing it's head. Said Tumbleweed has directed everypony's gaze to the not pony corpse in town. Said sniper is waiting for more "Volunteers".*
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
And then John was a zombie
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ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
*BANG!*

...

If you wouldn't mind Silva, I would like some help here.
I rather not sit here waiting for my head to go boom from a 308. Winchester.

Also, I th- *BOOM!* l......
Damn, he's got a grenade launcher....
This town is doomed....
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
*Call in tactical nuke* Does that help? xD
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BlackPtera Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Is it just me or does Octavia look like an Olimar, from pikmin, and Octavia hybrid in the last panel?
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
I guess, but I like her nose :<.
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:iconblackptera:
BlackPtera Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
There's nothing wrong with her nose, just I keep expecting to see pikmin in the background. For some odd reason...
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Lol, ok I'll just put those in the background next time and they'll be best friends xD
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JohnDavidbiehl Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
looks really good!
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Thanks :>
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JohnDavidbiehl Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
your welcome!
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MINERVUS Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
"Today... The GLORIOUS 5th OF NOVEMBER WE CELEBRATE THE ANNIVERSARY OF THE GREAT FALLEN HERO THE MASTER CHIEF, JHON 117... Besides the Gunpowder plot and all of that ^^"

12 days? I didn't count the days of updates (just sometimes) because I not put pressure in the artist. I always wait patiently (again, sometimes ), so don't worry my friend, take your time and thanks for give us an AWESOME story to follow ;). I wonder where did Scratch go?
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
YAY!

Thanks man, it gets to me for making people wait, but im more relaxed then i used to be ;>.
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