Ah yeah, continuity is an issue for me ^^'. If I had the idea of writing my story first then drawing it I'd probably not have that issue, but unfortunately it's the way it is now. Issue 4 is the first real written out issue.
I think it would help you alot. And get others to tell you what could be improved on. For example with this page, it would be a good idea if we saw her leave the building in more detail. I know myself that a picture might look good in your head and when you first draw it, but then someone might come along and say "hey, it looks good, but it would look even more dynamic is you made the pose from this angle." etc, my boyfriend does that to my stuff alot and I really appreciate that he does, because it really helps.
That's true, I'm really the only one doing this comic, but extra help would be nice ^^. I got some guys that'd love to look over my comics before I post them so I'm covered on that ^^. Two heads are better than one is the phrase here. Thanks for the idea, I'm always happy to receive suggestions and tips :>.
hey, give some respect for the artist, he has a lot to draw for us, and he has to take a lot of short cuts to make this easier on him and still have a good story, plus we don't need that many panels, we can judge perfectly on our own that she left the building, if you notice the corner of the station in the forest panel