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Scratch N' Tavi 4 Page 8 by SilvatheBrony Scratch N' Tavi 4 Page 8 by SilvatheBrony
I'm surprise I got this uploaded in time. I've been lazy this week playing Thief. Fun game, I'd say worth a purchase if you enjoy stealth and collecting like I do :>.

EDIT: Added the missing caption for 'Present Day'
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:iconazurathewolfcat:
azurathewolfcat Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow Wow Woooow,what happen to Vinyl face :U ??Vinyl Scratch La 
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RECoyote Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
what happened to the links?
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
Oops! Haven't updated these yet.
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:iconantibullllseye:
Antibullllseye Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Photographer
Vinyl is PISSED!!!!!
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PonyUniverse Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
EPIC FACE!
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paperninja62 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i mist say, your work has gotten better and better through the comics!
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
Thanks, I've noticed myself. It's one of the reasons I made this comic, it's to show my progression.
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MasterghostUnlimited Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh dear what happen with this?
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:iconsilvathebrony:
SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
Vinyl's side of issue 3 when she ran out of the station.
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MasterghostUnlimited Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i see now
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:iconbabyjoshy5:
Babyjoshy5 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ehhh... jolly good... back to the main drama then I guess...
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Problem?
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Babyjoshy5 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Drama.
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Oh well of course ^^
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matty4z Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
..nice but feels like it skipped a bit?

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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Skipped?
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matty4z Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
well..one min she's  out side happy and
the next she was inside mad at herself?
but still love this story ^_^
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Also glad you enjoy it ^^
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Ah yeah, I forgot to put the caption of 'present day' on the first panel. It went from flashback to present day.
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matty4z Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
ah now I get it ^_^ ty
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Yes, also I added the caption just now ^^. That should help.
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8Kiba9 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
feels the same for me
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lyanawolf Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
hhmmm well how about turning her into a nightmare because of her anger x3 only if chu want to ofcours x3 
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Turning her into a nightmare?
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lyanawolf Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
sorry it probably seems stupid now
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Ok...
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:iconsteampunkpony:
SteamPunkPony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Been a while since I've seen your art! great to see your still up and at it!
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Yeah, I'm still at it ^^
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SniperTeam4 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Did Vinyl just find out that Lyra and Bon Bon tricked her out of the radio station and now she's upset that not only did she lose the place, but now Octavia is going to hate her too?
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Could be, so far she really isn't sure what to believe if Lyra actually is honest or not, but after what Vinyl heard from Tavi it made her thing Lyra was true.
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Alexander-Krozz Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
um...wait what? flashback? 
I must know! post more!... please ;P
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Yeah...Crap I forgot to put a caption saying "Present day" D:
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Alexander-Krozz Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh i see that now that i went back and read the other ones....
oh and her spiked bracelets... i thought she left them behind?

it was this one that i noticed that it said Scratch n' tavi 4 so i went back and read the other 3... books? i liked them... and now i really want you to update more :D
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Ah yeah, continuity is an issue for me ^^'. If I had the idea of writing my story first then drawing it I'd probably not have that issue, but unfortunately it's the way it is now. Issue 4 is the first real written out issue.

Thanks for reading, and yes I'll be continuing.
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Alexander-Krozz Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
damn and the Tattoo...
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Rafflessian Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
no Vinyl, dont do it
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CajesTheTabby Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
So.. first she exits a room into a corridor and then suddenly she's in the woods?? I think we're missing a few panels...
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
I thought it'd be obvious the 3 panel is viewed from the side of the building where a path goes into the building.
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CajesTheTabby Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Sadly, it wasnt for me, but I am being accused of being slow, so I guess that's the problem. 
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Sorry, I mean I'm just saying for myself. It might not be obvious for others as well. I do feel like I need to do better with transitions though cause I get questioned a lot about what's going on.
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CajesTheTabby Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I see, well, I would suggest showing people WIPs, or even do several different versions of a page. Just, think like this "Is this page clear enough, or do I need to pad it out some more?"
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
That could work quite well. I think I need to pad out more in general with my panels I think I've always had this problem. It just hard to tell since I create the page and know what's going on.
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CajesTheTabby Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I think it would help you alot. And get others to tell you what could be improved on. For example with this page, it would be a good idea if we saw her leave the building in more detail. I know myself that a picture might look good in your head and when you first draw it, but then someone might come along and say "hey, it looks good, but it would look even more dynamic is you made the pose from this angle." etc, my boyfriend does that to my stuff alot and I really appreciate that he does, because it really helps. 
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
That's true, I'm really the only one doing this comic, but extra help would be nice ^^. I got some guys that'd love to look over my comics before I post them so I'm covered on that ^^. Two heads are better than one is the phrase here. Thanks for the idea, I'm always happy to receive suggestions and tips :>.
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MonsterMan25 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's the radio station, silly
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CajesTheTabby Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
... Please explain how that is the answer to my question. 
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MonsterMan25 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the radio station is just a small bunker of a place, so the corridor led to the door out of the place and its located in a forest
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CajesTheTabby Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you, much better. Still, I would've liked a panel where she actually walked out of the bunker, but that might just be me.
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MonsterMan25 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hey, give some respect for the artist, he has a lot to draw for us, and he has to take a lot of short cuts to make this easier on him and still have a good story, plus we don't need that many panels, we can judge perfectly on our own that she left the building, if you notice the corner of the station in the forest panel

something you seem to have failed to notice
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SilvatheBrony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Don't worry Monster she's not disrespecting at all in fact she has helped me out :>. Thanks for backing me up though, I'm happy to know I have your support :>.
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